This "Welcome" section is too broad and does not portray anything unique about the company. The phrase "create something for everyone" is not supported with any tangible examples to give insight into what that means. Lastly, grammatical and syntax issues need to be addressed.
This version of the "Welcome" section achieves the goal of "welcoming" potential customers to the world of Moon Cleaning Co. Consumers immediately learn that this is a legitimate company that cares about their clientele.
The previous "About" section did not say anything unique and specific to entice customers. We needed an "About" section that would legitimize and humanize the company at the same time.
I chose to write in a letter format to personalize the company to prospective buyers. In addition to dwelling on how important it is that customers are made to feel special, I highlighted the specific problem that the company was created to solve. Finally, I incorporated specific key words about the type of cleanings that are provided for SEO-optimization.